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Psycodillica
Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 28
Lapeer,Mi,USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 05:14 PM


You mean more to me then words could ever say.
I thought our friendship was so strong,
Theat nothing could break that bond.
then with the blink of my eyes it was all over.
I don't know what more to do,
or what else to say.
I thought our friendship was to always stay,
but you threw that all away.
I have so much pain
and I will shead many tears.
I have never had a friend like you.
I thought you'd always be there as my friend.
But now you only speak hurtful words to me.
I will miss you,
and all those memories we would have made.
If you really want this friendship to deteriate
always remember...I loved you and always will,
because you were my best friend.
I wonder if this pain will ever end.
I never ment to hurt you,
when I said those awful things.
I wish you could forgive me,
but you have made it quite clear..
you do not wish to be my friend any more.
I guess this is goodbye for forever.
Wether by my deffanition or by yours.
One last time I will say I am sorry,
for what i said and because I am losing
my best friend Over a stupid comment I made.
May be someday you will forgive and forget,
but intill then is there is a then,
I will give you the space you need.
Goodbye my friend.

© Copyright 1999 Psycodillica - All Rights Reserved
swan
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58
california, usa
1 posted 1999-08-04 05:26 PM


i really like this one. i'm going through the same thing almost. you express your feelings very well!
Swan

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"You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love someboy, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black

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