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Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets


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I'm meandering through the back alleys,
Looking for the one I knew.
I've lost myself with the setting sun,
The sun of my youth.
Now I reminisce through memories,
Searching for my truth.
I'm walking the streets,
Searching for the unknown.
I've lost myself and need another,
Someone whom I can call me.
I'm walking the streets again,
Begging for a moment of reality.
I've tried and tried and tried and tried,
But reality is so much of an illusion.


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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?
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Very very thought provoking. Thank you for posting this.
JP
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Nice to read you again MI, you seem unfocused as of late..... everything okay?

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3 posted 08-04-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

First, it depends on your definition of unfocused...second, it depends on your definition of okay...

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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?
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But at least it's an allusion to something real....
Severn
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I really like this. I do understand that feeling...
angel girl
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very nice.
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