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culvram
New Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 8
Culver,OR USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 03:38 PM


It is not something,
you just give away.
It grows much stronger,
with each passing day.
You can't seem to hold it,
in the palm of your hand.
Yet, in times of need,
by it you stand.
It draws all your strength,
and disables your fear.
When you know for certain,
Your world is clear.
The power alone,
will bring you delight.
Knowing that it,
will treat you right.
Never forsake it,
it won't tell you a lie.
Instead, on it depend,
until you die.
This thing that I speak of,
in life is a must.
For nothing can work,
if we do not have trust

[This message has been edited by culvram (edited 08-04-99).]

© Copyright 1999 culvram - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-08-04 03:44 PM


Oh how hard it is to share trust sometimes, but your words ring true! Thank you for posting this.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-04 06:46 PM


So truthful. Yep, takes a long time to build and a short while to destroy, but oh, so important!!! Thanks for sharing this!!!
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-08-05 12:28 PM


This is nice - expressing quite well the often 'touchy' subject of trust. Well done!
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