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deannamarie
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since 1999-07-26
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0 posted 1999-08-04 01:02 PM


i am slowly going crazy, crazy going slowly am i
i'll be this way forever on this insane high

i've been sucked into the trap there's nothing left to say
except to say, "good-bye, i'm on my lonely way"

it's driving me crazy, i'm slowly going insane
i just can't stand this ongoing and forever pain

first my thoughts are spinning then they disappear
people say, "she's crazy, that poor lonely dear"

i don't know how it happened, i just don't know why
i'm slowly going crazy on this insane high

people just don't understand, they think that I don't hear
yet when they look at me they really see a mirror

cuz everyone's gone crazy, just the same as i
they'll be this way forever on this insane high

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elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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1 posted 1999-08-04 01:11 PM


there is a thin line between creativity and insanity, me thinks
deannamarie
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since 1999-07-26
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2 posted 1999-08-04 01:21 PM


Me thinks so too, but if I were really insane , do you think I would know it?
Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
3 posted 1999-08-05 09:56 AM


Nice poem.I enjoyed it.
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