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on this insane high

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deannamarie
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0 posted 08-04-99 01:02 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

i am slowly going crazy, crazy going slowly am i
i'll be this way forever on this insane high

i've been sucked into the trap there's nothing left to say
except to say, "good-bye, i'm on my lonely way"

it's driving me crazy, i'm slowly going insane
i just can't stand this ongoing and forever pain

first my thoughts are spinning then they disappear
people say, "she's crazy, that poor lonely dear"

i don't know how it happened, i just don't know why
i'm slowly going crazy on this insane high

people just don't understand, they think that I don't hear
yet when they look at me they really see a mirror

cuz everyone's gone crazy, just the same as i
they'll be this way forever on this insane high
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elvira
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1 posted 08-04-99 01:11 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

there is a thin line between creativity and insanity, me thinks
deannamarie
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2 posted 08-04-99 01:21 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

Me thinks so too, but if I were really insane , do you think I would know it?
Delores Hall
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3 posted 08-05-99 09:56 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Nice poem.I enjoyed it.
 
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