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A form of tumble
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A form of tumble |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A form of tumble The start and port are in your heart. The voyage into fantasy, The cargo is the player's part The captain sails for ecstasy. The ship carries a wanting soul And empty holes to fill its sail. Or just perhaps some beggars bowl Of empty passions and travail? A phantom's ship, a phantom's sea, Loads of wishes and desire. A phantom's cargo bonhomie, A hole to fill with aspires. Some journeys span, a journey to be, The cargo is the dreamer's art. The captain's soul the appointee, And home and port are in your heart. Be it ever so humble, I love a subtle tumble. |
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Areya Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 16 |
i love your rhythm and certainly your choice of words  but i don't really get the underlying meaning... is it meant to sound a bit risque? :Þ forgive me if i'm wrong.. Hees.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Not really risque just a play on the word tumble. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Well, I really enjoyed it...as more of a proclimation of loving..or something to that affect. Hmmmmm...maybe I'll read it a time or three more...to see if I catch it in a different light. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Welcome, Sy. A worthy door-opener ( and a well-made change) |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
YIPPEEEE !!!!...... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Be it ever so humble, I love a subtle tumble.' Why ... I believe Rockin' Randy has been with you a long while.  *Huggles* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Play it again, Sy.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could get sea sick, I felt this one |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
* * * The first of many. We will miss you, Sy. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This appears to be Sy's first post with us - What an intro, eh? |
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