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The Blessing

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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


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You soar over us
Gently covering us all
Making us feel secure

But surrounded in your glory
we are so small
Our problems disappear or
slowly start to fade

All thanks to your magnificence
and the glory of your love
You watch over all of us
with no restrictions

Never asking much of us
Never feeling shame
You're always understanding
Your love is forgiving

There is no hate
There is no fear
There is no prejudice
There is no pain
In your eyes
Dear Lord.

You love us
You bless us
Eternally!

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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


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Yes, Yes, Yes!!! I love it! great job! So well stated. Great place to be In CHRIST!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Very Beautiful........there are a lot of opportunities out there in the writers market for Christian poetry......maybe you should look into it.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Augchic711
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I'm honored that both of you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for the comment about publishing it. You completely have made me feel so much better about myself and my writings. Thank you all for your kind words.

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