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All night long

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-04-99 06:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



All night long
Laying awake
Trying to figure out
What Iíve done wrong

You know I love you
And I know you love me
But honey I canít see
What has gone wrong

At work I canít concentrate
And at night, I stay up late
Angry at you
For making me feel this way

Babe, my hopes were way over my head
Now theyíre down on the ground instead
I thought there was some kind of future
But I guess it was a dream
And not all things are what they seem

I know you love me
You know I love you
But there is nothing left for me to show
And nothing left for me to do
But to let you go

But I swear
Iíll never forget you
And you will see
Iíll walk beside you
For eternity
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INclan
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1 posted 08-04-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nice poem....for a cop-out. What you are really saying is that you no longer "like" her. True love keeps going.... Maybe I am being overly critical because everything hinges on what you mean by "let you go." I still believe the poet is giving up way too soon.

INclan
Dark Angel
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2 posted 08-05-99 01:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

INclan, thank you. maybe I am giving up, But I still love her and I will forever
Justbleu
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3 posted 07-17-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I hope it all worked out for you!!  
Dark one I was digging around the archives and found this...liked it!!  Take Care!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
Severn
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4 posted 05-06-2001 10:31 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

wow Mmy...and haven't you grown since this was posted...

lol..remember explanation marks???

Heheh...

hugs you...fun to read this dear.

K

(and to think I didn't know you then...wow...a lot has changed my friend yes?)
Dark Angel
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5 posted 05-17-2001 10:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ohh GOSH!!  hehehe

blushing lol

yes I have grown oh Lordy.
I don't even rhyme anymore

but am going to work on that.

Thanks Hon

for the laugh.

oh the exclamation marks heheheyes how can I forget, you certainly snapped me out of them quick smart hey?
Jamie
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6 posted 05-17-2001 10:30 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

you really have changed your style Mmy---
and K-- you will have to explain to me what an "explanation" mark is sometime---
Hugsu2

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Severn
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7 posted 05-17-2001 11:30 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Er...um...explanation marks are um cousins to exclamation marks and Maree used to use them a LOT.

Can't show you one - it's not on MY keyboard..in fact, I think explanation marks are really an Australian thing.

So there.

K
Dark Angel
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8 posted 05-17-2001 11:38 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Explanation Marks are not a cousin to the exclamation mark, they are merely the stuff up from a certain Kiwi poet ROFL

heheh Kamla
Severn
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9 posted 05-17-2001 11:45 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

BOLLOCKS!

Now - THAT'S Kiwi.

Heh

K
Jamie
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10 posted 05-17-2001 11:47 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

No that is Kiwi K

heh

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Severn
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11 posted 05-17-2001 11:52 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

~splutter~

WHAT???

Grrrrrrrrrr..you wait Mr...you'll see..you'll see...

K says futilely..

Dark Angel
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12 posted 05-17-2001 11:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

LOL@Jamsey   hahaha
Severn
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13 posted 05-17-2001 11:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

JAMSEY??

ROTF - HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

Here Jamsey...sounds like a Sheep dog's name!

HAHAHAHAAAA

Smirk
Jamie
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14 posted 05-18-2001 12:04 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

~shrug~ better a sheep dog name than a cat name.....heh
Severn
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15 posted 05-18-2001 12:07 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

LOW BLOW
LOW BLOW

UNFAIR

You are disqualified and I win.

So there.

champion K
Dark Angel
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16 posted 05-18-2001 12:12 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Jamsey

Jovial
Adventurous
Marvellous
Sexy
Endearing
Youthful

  K

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-18-2001).]

Dark Angel
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17 posted 05-18-2001 12:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Now tell me that doesnt suit him K  hehe
Severn
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18 posted 05-18-2001 12:13 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Stay away from my sheep dog growls K...

K
Dark Angel
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19 posted 05-18-2001 12:16 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

HA

NEVERRRRRRRR


LOL
Severn
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20 posted 05-18-2001 12:20 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh yeah?

Whatcha gonna do about it?

Huh huh?

Wanna a fight do ya?
Remember - who dislocates people's shoulders in tickle fights? YEAH ME.. (but don't tell J or he won't let me come back haha)...

AND you spelled marvellous wrong so there.

K


Dark Angel
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21 posted 05-18-2001 01:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

"Wanna a fight do ya?"

Now does the "a" really belong there K ?

sheeesh LOL
Severn
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22 posted 05-18-2001 01:36 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

AAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH

I have nothing to say.

Nothing!

'0000000000000000000000000000'

bother
 
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