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Sue
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since 1999-08-04
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France

0 posted 1999-08-04 04:22 AM


I'm going to fall and don't know when
or from what height.
I'm going to fall and don't know if
I'll land alright.
I'm in the dark, I wish I had
The power of sight.


© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-04 09:42 AM


I like this one! Very effective. Welcome to the family, Sue.



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-04-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-08-04 09:43 AM


Nicely done....very much said with very few words and not a wasted word amoung them!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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