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Vertigo

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Sue
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0 posted 08-04-99 04:22 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sue

I'm going to fall and don't know when
or from what height.
I'm going to fall and don't know if
I'll land alright.
I'm in the dark, I wish I had
The power of sight.

© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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I like this one! Very effective. Welcome to the family, Sue.



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hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely done....very much said with very few words and not a wasted word amoung them!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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