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TSU325
Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 11
Detroit, Michigan, USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 02:12 AM


His skin as soft as satin,
smooth and firm to the touch.
His arms as strong as steel,
I can feel it in his hug.
Showers me with kisses,
and his lips I love.

The things he does to show me,
How much he really cares.
He'd give me the shirt off of his back,
If a jacket I did not wear.

He acts so hard, and acts so tuff,
When lying to himself.
I understand the way he feels,
I once was hurt myself.

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-04 08:06 AM


You have done a good job here. You fit your words together nicely.
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