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Who am I ?

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Kitty**
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since 07-27-99
Posts 438
Charlottesville,VA USA


0 posted 08-03-99 11:37 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

A simple life is all that I want,
to walk with my memories.
To loose myself with my thoughts,
of one , that's important to me.

Too many people clutter my life,
and I need to take some time out.
I need the time for myself, to
find out, what I'm all about.

This void that I feel, is not pleasant.
My ache seems to be, more and more.
The empty and lost feeling I have,
is something I need to explore.

Where am I going ? Who am I ?
I need the answers to this.
Why am I not happy, I ask ?
Exactly what is it amiss ?

I go out with a friend and leave them,
with never a thought or a care.
I am devoid of all feeling,
for me, there is nothing there.

I have to come, to terms with myself.
Make life worth living once more.
I want to care about tomorrow,
There's nothing for me to live for.

Somehow I've lost my way.
There's no one, to help find me.
Where am I going ? Who am I ?
Who knows ? Forever lost I may be.

K...
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-04-99 12:52 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

If this is about you, you will find your way. Assessing your feeling, looking into your soul, those are the ways to find out who you truly are. I had to do this, I know. A wonderful piece, Kitty. Keep it up.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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2 posted 08-04-99 10:53 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

I know some of those feelings.When you have
a lot of responsibility it can be overwhelming.Keep your chin up.
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