How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Attribute Assessment
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Attribute Assessment

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 07-29-99
Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


0 posted 08-03-99 08:52 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

Thoughts of aging weigh me down
My great big feet just drag...
I just passed a full length mirror
And saw how my ass sags!
Boobs drifted deep south years ago -
Succumbed to cruel gravity.
My navel rests between the pair
To grace my pudgy tummy.
Deep crevices called wrinkles
Surround my lips and eyes.
And when did these barrels take the place
Of my once decent thighs?
If I sit too long, an aching starts
Within my lower back,
But if I walk, then each step brings
From one or both knees CRACK!
Without split ends and covered gray,
My hair would cease to exist.
The makeup doesnít even cover the flaws.
Iím not sure why I persist?
My disposition, once so sweet,
Has lost out to despair.
So stay put on those bar stools, guys.
I simply do not care!

© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


1 posted 08-03-99 09:15 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I'm a little confused? Are you a topless dancer in a bar? Is that what you mean by telling the guys to stay put on their bar stools? (lol) This was painfully cute. Now, if you'll excuse me Ms. Loreal awaits!
Lorelei54
Member
since 07-27-99
Posts 486


2 posted 08-03-99 09:25 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Suthern, I know for a fact it's not this bad honey...so tell it like it is next time...great words and story though.
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 07-29-99
Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 08-03-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thank you, deVine one! *G* (I should have added... can't dance worth diddly! LOL)

Lor: OK, so my hair isn't gray... just a teensy exaggeration? LOL. But my sister took some pictures this weekend to send to sweet Toe... and the rest, unfortunately, is all too accurate! *G*
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


4 posted 08-03-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Can't speak for the outside, Suthern, but you seem to be a hell of a gal on the inside. That counts.
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 07-29-99
Posts 5839
Ala bam a


5 posted 08-04-99 09:27 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Balladeer....She is quite a gal on the outside too.....and though I haven't been "inside" of her yet....I think that's probably pretty good also....LOL.....Oh, wait, you mean her heart and mind don't ya?....Ummmm....never mind....that's obvious!
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 07-29-99
Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 08-04-99 09:41 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Balladeer: Thank you, kind sir!

Toerag: So what are you waiting for... an engraved invitation? ROFL! SMOOCH, sweetie... and thanks!
aziza
Member Elite
since 07-09-2006
Posts 3000
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!


7 posted 06-03-2007 02:11 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

:: Laughs ::

And years later, this lady is simply more beautiful!

Alison
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


8 posted 11-12-2007 08:58 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

lovely

ARCTIC WIND
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Attribute Assessment Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors