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Sally S.
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0 posted 08-03-99 08:07 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

This kiss I give before I part,
Take it swiftly; Know from my heart
That though time has shattered dreams
And left in wake darkened schemes,
My love remains in yearning true.
Whilst this bereft soul cries out for you.
© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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Sally,
Beautifully written with not a single wasted word. Nice poem!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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Short....to the point....meaningful
Sally S.
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Thank you both for the comments. I appreciate the feedback.
Cinderella
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Wonderfully said Sally!
Psycodillica
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That is so sweet... Nicely done. Pat yourself on the back:-)
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