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Whispers in the WInd

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Tim
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0 posted 08-03-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

Gentle whispers in the wind,
What is the message that you send?
Calling softly, "Come to me."
What I ask, am I to see?
What is there that I will find
In the recess of my mind?
Are there lessons you will teach
About the walls that I must breach
To find what I have hidden there
And if I find, must I beware?
Fearing all that I have sought,
Hoping all won't be for naught,
Trying to dispel all doubt
In the dreams that seek me out.
I seek the answers in the night,
Hoping... praying... for the light.




[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-03-99).]
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Excellent slice of Darkness.

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Absolutely beautiful Tim....very well written and it speaks volumes. Thank you so much for sharing!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
elvira
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eloquently expressed, great rhyme and rhythm, Tim


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4 posted 08-03-99 09:31 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent execution, Tim.
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Excellent! I like this one.
Areya
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Loved every word
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Beutiful poem.I enjoyed it.Happy writing.
Andrew Scott
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Well Done, Sir. Well Done!
Seymour Tabin
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Enjoyed the read. Big TU
Tim
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Thank you all very much for your kind comments...
Nan
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Through these words you do impart
Your own life's lessons from your heart.
Each reader, from your wisdom shares
New vision from a man who cares...
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12 posted 06-03-2007 02:22 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Wow.  So beautiful.

Is Tim still here? I really am enjoying his poetry.

A
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I love this poem

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