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DEADLY DREAMS! (feedback welcomed)

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DeadlyMoonspell
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0 posted 08-03-99 05:41 PM       View Profile for DeadlyMoonspell   Email DeadlyMoonspell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DeadlyMoonspell

My eyes are gathering, I can't stand the pleasure I feel
I don't believe in love, cause I know it's just a raptured feeling
The sky is falling down, and I am just flying
My soul has been drowned, can't you see - I'm dying !

Darkest Dreamz
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-13-99 01:01 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh dear person...you should believe in love - just believe it's hard to find....it is there...a precious jewel on the bottom of a deep dark ocean, but it is there....Raptured feelings are what makes the world go round, by the way....Very intense little piece you have here ! Loved it....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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I agree with poet...You do have a searing piece here..Well done..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


DarkChiild
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3 posted 08-18-99 12:37 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

I liked your poem, and I agree to some extent... But love exists, but love hurts. But sometimes, just sometimes, it's really worth it no matter how it ends.

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Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first.

--DarkChiild--

Nan
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It's always worth it.....
 
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