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Open Poetry #1

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Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-08-03 10:33 AM

You were always there,
and you will always be,
someone that I love,
you meant a lot to me.

You were always there,
and you will always be,
one of my friends,
don't you see?

You were always there,
and you were always right.
You helped me a lot,
you tried with all your might.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

1 posted 1999-08-03 11:33 AM

This was nice.I don't know who this person
is that was there for you.But it is always
good to have someone in your life.That
reminds me I have someone I have to thank
myself for being there for many years.
Happy writing.

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

2 posted 1999-08-03 04:36 PM

Thanks

Emmy
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since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

3 posted 1999-08-03 08:59 PM

What a sweet tribute...

How lucky those are that have friends like that. But how does the title fit into this one? Is it a tribute to a friend who you are saying a last farewell to? I'm just asking out of curiousity.

Good job on this one!

[This message has been edited by Emmy (edited 08-03-99).]

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

4 posted 1999-08-06 12:17 PM

Actually,
I wrote it a long time ago. I just tuoched it up. It wuz for annabeth. She died when I wuz 6 and she wuz 7

[This message has been edited by Sundance (edited 08-06-99).]

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

5 posted 1999-08-08 12:40 PM

Anyone else?

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