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Lucie
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0 posted 08-03-99 09:01 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Darkness fell and the night was clear,
but nothing filled that pang of fear.
For he had left in a state of anger,
looking for excitement and danger.

Her heart was heavy from words they said,
which now thought over ached in her head.
Though they were true and very well spoken,
he'd flared from the truth his heart truly broken.

"You love me no more!" she screamed with hate
"Another you loved and now its too late!"
"Forgive you?" she wailed "Never tis true,
for my love was faithful, and only for you!"

And as he drove off
and silence took over.
She returned to her bedroom,
and her once-a-week lover.

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 08-03-99).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 08-03-99 09:21 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

this was good! Don't know why it wasn't replied to.
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very thoughtfull...nice piece makes the heart reach out for you
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