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Poet deVine
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We gained serenity from our vows to love
and drew together in celebration
young in spirit and heart we began
our lives of collaboration

Will our love survive to that golden time
will your hand still reach out to find me
will we still note each glance, each touch
that guides us to our eternity

Or will we blink and loose the sight
of what was planned as love’s design
will we turn and walk away
from the world that is yours and mine

Perhaps the future is best unknown
each moment seen as a cherished token
that combined with our love will ever be
a bond that remains unbroken.

When does a memory become an heirloom
to be passed down from heart to soul
when all the beautiful tomorrows
become the yesterdays that make us whole

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deVine one, you ARE a master of your trade. Very well done. Take care of the days, one by one, and the years will take care of themselves.
elvira
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Poet deVine, eloquently expressed indeed...it can be so lovely to daydream of days gone by...*sigh*
PS: did you see my answer to your musical challenge?


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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim...
stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving...Master...chat?
...apart...plain...vice...shameless self promotion


hoot_owl_rn
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DeVine....what a delightful feast for the eyes and mind. Well written!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Sally S.
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Poet,
This must be one of your best yet! The visual format only added to this... Though,the poem is stong enough to stand on it's own. I truly enjoyed this poem...well done!!

Andrew Scott
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Poet Most deVine: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work. I enjoyed all of it but particularly that of the last stanza. As for wanting to know the future; Do not seek knowledge of the future, for oft it will torture...stripping the blissful innocence of ignorance while vanquishing hope in life's uncertain game. That's all I got to say about that. Once again, a fine offering. Thanks
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on the threshold of a dream


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Great poem... I especially loved the last!
Nan
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Reverent bow, my friend...
Alwye
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Beautiful, Poet deVine. I really love the last stanza.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
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a jewel in your tiara
you have lived up to your name
 
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