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amber
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0 posted 08-02-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

through enviuos eyes,
i see you,
being touched the way i want,
being held the way i want ,
so inside i learn to hate,
every smile that crosses your face.

your beautiful hands,
so soft like silk,
looking at my own,
worn from time,
by all the pain,
we will never share in common.

your eyes still affixed,
with that soft glow,
that burning tears,
have forced from my own,
everytime my heart was broken.

i see the love you have,
and it touches my soul,
because perhaps,
its something surreal,
that i have never known.

i watch the security he provides for you,
and i cant even feel safe within myself,
and i long for that one moment,
when i can finally feel,
everything you take for granted.

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Princess Lily
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since 07-13-99
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1 posted 08-03-99 01:18 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Perfect!I LOVE THIS POEM!it is wonderful!!!And soooooooooo true

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

amber
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2 posted 08-03-99 02:26 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thanx for your comment, its always nice to know that other people feel the way i do at times.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 08-03-99 06:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"and i long for that one moment,
when i can finally feel,
everything you take for granted."

an exceptional three lines here!! What a perfect ending to a wonderful poem.


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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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