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IsabelleSkye
Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253


0 posted 1999-08-02 08:02 PM


your
lips
leave
a
trail
of
moist
kisses
down
the
length
of
my
neck

as they wander from mine
to taste the salt of my skin
exploring the tang of sea air
mingled with perfume and the flavour of me
your tongue lingering in sensitive spots

the butterfly softness of your kisses
heighten the feelings of awareness
awakening my senses
to this lover's dance
to this recital of emotions

as we move to the symphony of love
known only to our two hearts
we explore the recesses of mind and heart
hearing the music, as old as time itself
the strains of real love's cantata



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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

© Copyright 1999 IsabelleSkye - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 1999-08-02 08:08 PM


Did anybody get the number of that truck? Sizzlin'!

My answer "I Would Kiss You" is a page of two back.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-08-02 08:13 PM


Gets out the hose.....wow, very nice!
You did a fine job with this one Isabelle!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
3 posted 1999-08-02 08:21 PM


Loved the trail....
of.....
......Kisses.

Very nice, Isabelle.


Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
4 posted 1999-08-02 09:46 PM


Happy trails to him!
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-08-02 10:07 PM


The style is very effective. The words so descriptive that I got chills! Very good!
Cinderella
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
6 posted 1999-08-03 03:06 AM


Trail of kisses-how delicious!
Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
7 posted 1999-08-03 04:16 AM


WOW! I loved this poem, and I certainly loved giving you the inspiration to write it *8)
This just brightened up my morning BIG STYLE!!!

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
8 posted 1999-08-03 08:41 AM


Yo - Izzy and Eric - Are you two behavin' here in my forum??? Do I have to send MissNTrope out to chaperone you again??????

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