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God's Love

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Misty
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since 08-01-99
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0 posted 08-02-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

As the day ends and it comes dusk,
He waits patiently to hear from us.
We can feel what he has to say,
When we're on our knees and pray.
He wants us to choose the right,
So we won't see the blinding light.
He can seens our fears,
And he shares the pain with our tears.
Trials he'll guide us through,
If our faith in hims stays true.
He's always watching me and you,
And his love and guidence will contiune.
He's loving caring and kind,
But him on earth you will not find.
He looks down on us with tender love,
His name is God from above.

By: Misty

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Kelly
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1 posted 08-03-99 11:59 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I really loved your poem. Great thoughts to start my day. Thanks
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 08-03-99 01:18 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well it's nice to see someone join my side. haha. Feel like I been the only one doing spiritual poetry. Nice job! He is here, HE lives in us!
God bless you and keep it up!
Nan
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3 posted 08-03-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Were any of you aware that we have an entire section on
Spiritual Poetry
on the main Passions in Poetry site?????

Check it out...


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-03-99).]
Misty
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4 posted 08-03-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

Thanks you guys for commenting on my poem!
It mean alot to me!

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Misty
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5 posted 08-04-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

Could any of you guys give me some pointers of making this poem better? Please tell me if you do thanks!

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Lil-bit
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6 posted 08-04-99 09:01 PM       View Profile for Lil-bit   Email Lil-bit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil-bit

A very touching poem. Did you know that Helen Steiner Rice (who is known for her Christian poetry and greeting cards) started out simply just writing small rhyming verses for a greeting card company?

Her poems became in such demand that the company started a line of cards with a spiritual emphasis.

Continue writing the beautiful poems - you may be the next person working for a greeting card company writing cards, as did Helen S. Rice!

By the way - I read this in her biography!
Blessings!

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Misty
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7 posted 08-04-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

Thanks so much lit-bit! That means so much to me

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