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Now I See

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deannamarie
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Now I See

Lately youve been tired, distant in a way
Youve been jumpy, your nerves kind of frayed
You let me wonder what it was I did wrong
Now I see it was you all along

Now I understand whats been driving me away
You finally told the truth about what happened that day
I guess deep down I knew it was true
But I guess it was something I hoped youd never do

Now everytime I kiss and hold you tight
All I remember is what you told me last night
How not even two days away from you
is all it takes to feel hurt and used

Now I wonder if to let you go or hold you near
Cause the pain of this again is all I fear
I promised Id love you and that Id never leave
So what was the reason of doing this to me?

Deanna Ballman
8-2-99



[This message has been edited by deannamarie (edited 08-03-99).]
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1 posted 08-02-99 04:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Could you explain this if you don't mind? I was a little bit confused as to what exactly he did.

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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pain is all that matters here not what bought it... you show how he hurt you just be showing your pain...

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3 posted 08-02-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for deannamarie   Email deannamarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deannamarie

Elizabeth-He cheated on me a couple weeks ago and just admited it last night. It's just an expression of how I feel. I think sometimes I am unclear in my meaning but my poetry is like my diary. I know what I mean when I write. And sometimes I don't intend there to be a certain thing he did, this poem could apply to more people for reasons they've been hurt. I hope I haven't confused you anymore than you already were. Poohbear-you see what I mean.
 
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