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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-02-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Forget my friends, all that I've said before.
Love is for Saints and fools, I am neither.
I am filled with the darkness I adore.
The last ten years were only a breather.

There is glory to find in sweet sorrow.
This coldness of soul makes me feel so warm.
Spite has stolen joy, making me hollow.
Be warned, I have unleashed this inner storm.

Hate rages at the core of my being.
Love is an endearing, seductive lie.
A glimpse of my soul would send you fleeing.
You can't escape so why bother to try?

Some day I will rest and take my last breath.
Until that time, I will court Lady Death.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 08-02-99 02:36 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

this is well written but it saddens me greatly DE... *hugs* love ya big brother...
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 08-02-99 07:39 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Courting lady death only serves to introduce you to her brother Grimm Reaper.
This is well written Dream, none of us are saints or devils....just somewhere in between trying to make sense out of this thing called life.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Alwye
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3 posted 08-02-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Vey well written. Very dark, Dream.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-02-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey! Who turned out the lights?
And who is that grim guy?
He's giving my nightmares frights.
And his poetry's only partly why.

Hey there, Dreamie. Another well crafted poem, albeit a tad darker of soul than I usually court.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 08-02-99 11:38 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This merely fit my mood this afternoon.
Crystal
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6 posted 08-02-99 11:48 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

This was very dreary. I can only wonder what could happen to make you have such deep dark feelings.
leelew
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7 posted 08-03-99 12:03 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

I liked it.You can tell you were having another bad day.Whatever your feeling flows onto your writing.

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"There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart"
~one voice~
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8 posted 08-03-99 12:13 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Knowing the source of inspiration for this poem, I must say this is expressed in a perfect manner, Dream. I feel for you greatly, and I understand as well. Just hang in there. Keep your head up. It's hard, I know, but it's the only way to make it through. The more of yourself you put in to your poetry, the better it becomes. I can see that. Be strong, love.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

WhtDove
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9 posted 08-03-99 09:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You certainly have a God given talent for writing.
Sometimes it is difficult to forgive others, but even harder to forgive ourselves.
I sure would "hate" to see you go out that way!
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