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Open Poetry #1

Within My Heart

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 1999-08-02 04:31 AM

Deep within my heart, you’ll find,
An emptiness abound.
A longing to be loved by one,
Could this ever be found?

It matters not at all, to me,
The color of his hair.
Be it brown, or be it gold,
Of this, I’ve little care.

And as of this, the same is true,
With the color of his eyes.
I only wish to see the truth,
For all the tears he’s cried.

And if somehow, I had the chance,
Of this, I would be sure.
I’d dedicate my heart and soul,
His eyes would cry no more.

So this I offer forth to you,
An honest, subtle start.
A simple chance, a sudden glance,
Of what lies…deep within my heart.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 08-02-99).]

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-02 04:37 AM

From such beginnings, empires are built. Magnificent way to start off a deeper relationship, dear Lady. I applaud your courage in opening up so.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 1999-08-02 04:39 AM

A nobleness I wish others would share, to look inside, rather than be charmed by the package!

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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars.
-Unknown-

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-08-02 09:47 AM

Very nice!

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 1999-08-02 12:05 PM

Thank you all very much!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

5 posted 1999-08-02 03:46 PM

This is great. I like it a lot, Satiate.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cheris'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 1999-08-02 07:56 PM

Well expressed... it's what inside that counts! *S*

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