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Within My Heart

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Nicole
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0 posted 08-02-99 04:31 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

Deep within my heart, you’ll find,
An emptiness abound.
A longing to be loved by one,
Could this ever be found?

It matters not at all, to me,
The color of his hair.
Be it brown, or be it gold,
Of this, I’ve little care.

And as of this, the same is true,
With the color of his eyes.
I only wish to see the truth,
For all the tears he’s cried.

And if somehow, I had the chance,
Of this, I would be sure.
I’d dedicate my heart and soul,
His eyes would cry no more.

So this I offer forth to you,
An honest, subtle start.
A simple chance, a sudden glance,
Of what lies…deep within my heart.


[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 08-02-99).]
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-02-99 04:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

From such beginnings, empires are built. Magnificent way to start off a deeper relationship, dear Lady. I applaud your courage in opening up so.

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2 posted 08-02-99 04:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

A nobleness I wish others would share, to look inside, rather than be charmed by the package!

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Very nice!
Nicole
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4 posted 08-02-99 12:05 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Thank you all very much!
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5 posted 08-02-99 03:46 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is great. I like it a lot, Satiate.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cheris'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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6 posted 08-02-99 07:56 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well expressed... it's what inside that counts! *S*
 
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