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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


0 posted 08-02-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

Speak the silence,
show the confusion.
We live our lives,
it's just an illusion.
We're wasted away,
or so it seems.
A mind without hopes
a love without dreams.
Travel the roads,
time's endless mile.
Furtive and casting,
covered in guile.
It ends at the end,
where can that be?
In a pot of chaos,
the endless sea.
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 08-02-99 08:07 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow, this is sad but beautifully written! You have done a great job here! I love it!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 08-02-99 08:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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3 posted 08-14-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

"In a pot of chaos.." Now how'd you know where I live?? he he No, on a more serious note, I felt this one deserved to be dusted off and sent back - Very interesting opinion of life in general...I always say, we are just checkers in this game...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

elvira
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4 posted 08-14-99 11:16 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

may you have happier dreams in the coming night
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 08-15-99 12:46 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


6 posted 08-15-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Disorder can be a beautiful thing...as long as it's ordered properly(hahaha like my pun!!!)
Thank you PFF, (cough) the dust was getting thick!

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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel




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Severn
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7 posted 10-21-1999 02:50 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hmmm - and how endless the sea seems right now.
Oscar Wilde
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8 posted 03-31-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Oscar Wilde   Email Oscar Wilde   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Oscar Wilde

This must be your first post! Gosh you've come a long way since then. I wish I had known you then.

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O.
passing shadows
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displaced


9 posted 04-17-2004 01:20 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sigh...yes
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


10 posted 01-04-2007 01:48 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

My oh my...you've come a long way Christopher.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

hunnie_girl
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11 posted 01-09-2007 10:09 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Christopher- Very lovely, I liked the thoughts in thios poem, I don't know how your poetry is now so i will have to check it out and see how different it is. I was however very impressed for a first post
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

jarrett
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12 posted 01-14-2007 10:50 PM       View Profile for jarrett   Email jarrett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jarrett

Wow there are no words to describe how I felt when I read this... well done.
MegMeg
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13 posted 05-27-2007 03:40 PM       View Profile for MegMeg   Email MegMeg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MegMeg

wow... that was beautiful
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