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real agian, lost agian..

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amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


0 posted 08-02-99 02:05 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

here you are,
your touch so real,
and im lost agian,
in what i feel,
that i never want to lose you.

her i am,
tears washed away,
forgotten the pain,
of our yesterdays,
to find a future with you.

making me laugh,
my happiness is real,
losing my resistance,
its now surreal,
because i know you make me happy.

kissing me softly,
no doubt in my mind,
that once agian,
im lost this time,
becuase i cant push you away.

laying next to you,
i feel safe agian,
in your arms,
salvation begins,
becuase i trust you now.

putting my faith in you,
to know that im enough,
hasnt been as hard for me,
as i thought it was,
becuase i understand your intentions.

its real agian,
and i need you,
im lost agian,
but what can i do,
im falling in love agian.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


1 posted 08-02-99 08:05 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The feelings of love...Well done! If I may give a word of wisdom. No man is our salvation and hold no man as your god. That seems to be our biggest downfall.
I like your poem!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 08-02-99 08:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is a nice poem, but you really need to watch the little mistakes, do a spell check before posting if at all possible, little things like that really distract from your work
 
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