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BONNIE
New Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 3
VA

0 posted 1999-08-02 01:04 AM


THERE'S SOME THING IN MY HEART
I WANT TO PASS YOUR WAY,
BUT I JUST CAN'T FIND THE PROPER
WORDS TO SAY ,
I WANT TO SAY I LOVE YOU ,
YES I REALLY CARE ALOT
THEN SOMETHING DEEP INSIDE OF
ME SAYS I SHOULD NOT,
SO I'LL SEND THIS LITTLE NOTE
TO TELL YOU THAT I CARE
YES THIS FEELING DEEP INSIDE OF ME
IS REALLY SOMETHING RARE!

© Copyright 1999 BONNIE - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-02 08:24 AM


Short but to the point. Well done! They say good things come in small packages.
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-08-02 08:25 AM


ain't love grand?...makes you want to shout your feelings from the roof tops at times...Welcome Bonnie
Donna
New Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 1
VA
3 posted 1999-08-03 12:54 PM


I LKED THIS POEM
BONNIE
New Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 3
VA
4 posted 1999-08-03 12:59 PM


TO ALL WHO READ MY POEM, THANK YOU . TO THOSE WHO DID'NT ,OH WELL THEIR LOSS.I HOPE I CAN PUT ANOTHER ONE ON SOON

[This message has been edited by BONNIE (edited 08-03-99).]

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