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redwriter1
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0 posted 08-01-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

It so amazes me
how that little light
i give off
touched you so deeply
and now you shine
more brightly than
the brighest creature
in the sea

but remember this
it's my only wish
as time goes by..

it's my pleasure
to watch you fly
i'll just float here
and say
hi hi hi

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1 posted 08-02-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

nice piece.. Something about it reminds me of cummings though.. Keep on writing..

Love,
Lady

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redwriter1
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2 posted 08-02-99 07:18 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Cummings?... really? I'll have to go look up some stuff by him.(err it is a "him" right?) Thanks for the comment.
hoot_owl_rn
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Cute!
graham
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4 posted 08-05-99 10:34 AM       View Profile for graham   Email graham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for graham

Cute and funny!
You're in touch with a sensitivity that few can express.
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