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This life (opinions please)

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CSwtThng
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0 posted 08-01-99 11:00 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CSwtThng

This life took me so deep
Deep down into sorrow
I just sit and weep
Will I see tomorrow

This life broght me down low
How do I continue to live
With nowhere left to go
And nothing left to give

I don't know wrong from right
The pain has made me tough
Always prepared to fight
My disposition is so rough

I can't take the silence
Such maddness never seen
Should I turn to violence
The cruelty oh so keen

It's all becoming clear
My heart i can revive
There's nothing left to fear
I know I must survive


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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-02-99 02:00 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ah, a poem that describes me so well it is almost eerie. I truly felt this, CSwtThng. Excellent piece of work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 08-02-99 08:29 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This is well done! We always have ourselves to give to another in need. A kind deed to another helps us to feel good!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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3 posted 08-02-99 08:39 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sometimes we have no choice but to survive....everything in time will pass and life goes on, with or without us.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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