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Celtic Knot |
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dvlishimp Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 126USA |
Like a Celtic Knot made from two strand string are we joined. Strongly tied together in an endless bond while also wrapped tightly around eachother. We are entwined down to the very fabric of our souls. Feeling as though our love has its roots in ancient history and is still strong. Through lives and centuries, it blossoms again and again- true love revealed. It's ancient secrets of mystical love and energy shared through intimacy and passion. My Love, I reaffirm my love for thee again this century and into the next. The knot holds strong, never fraying at the edges. For each pull and tug only draws us closer together. An embrace forever. Together beautiful. Where you end I begin and where I end you begin. I am bound and tied to you for all of existence. This is not only my promise, my vow, my pledge, or my oath... it is my eternal wish that you have granted me each and every day together. I love you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is a good one. Very romantic and heart felt. Don't know why no one else has replied to this. I think it is well done!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This was romanticly beautiful and I love the feeling of it, but I would like to see it in a different format. I have taken the liberty of deleting a few words, adding a few words and changing the format. Just another way to see it and only an idea, I'm not telling you to change your work, only giving you another view of it. Like a Celtic Knot, made from two strands of string, we are joined. Strongly tied together in an endless bond, we are entwined down to the very fabric of our souls. It is as though our love has its roots in ancient history and is still as strong. Through lives and centuries, it blossoms again and again- ever blooming...true love revealed. It's ancient secrets of mystical love and energy are shared through intimacy and passion. My Love, I reaffirm my love for thee again this century and on into the next. The knot holds strong, never fraying at the edges. Each pull and tug only serves to draw us closer together, in an embrace forever...together beautiful. Where you end I begin. Where I end you begin...infinate. I am bound and tied to you for all of existence. This is not only my promise, my vow, my pledge, or my oath... but rather my eternal wish that you have granted me each and every day together. I love you. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 08-02-99).] [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 08-02-99).] |
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