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Tim
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0 posted 08-01-99 03:24 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

I float upon a distant cloud
As mysteries of your love enshroud,
For in my heart your words resound,
You bring such joy, but yet confound.

Empyrian delights you bring,
With voices of the gods you sing,
But then you say it matters not,
Where one seeks their Camelot.

A devil or an angel be?
You carry me to praecipe,
And yet I yearn my Lorelei,
Upon the rocks, I do espy.

The day shall come when love will die,
Within my heart my soul shall cry,
It matters not for I shall seek,
My Lorelei, for I am weak.


[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-01-99).]
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elvira
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1 posted 08-01-99 04:04 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

lovely...a thoroughly enjoyable read...i admire the way you rhyme

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hoot_owl_rn
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Nice read....reminds me a lot of some of the older poets styles...I like this one.
Tim
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3 posted 08-01-99 08:52 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Here at the nursing home, they let us have access to the 'puters every night for an hour, right after the Lawrence Welk show.
Actually, I like to think I am in the twilight years of my middle age and not an older poet.(this is a joke by the way)
glad you enjoyed the poem.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 08-01-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Float upon a distant cloud.....lovely..... Everything is right on with this one... meter, rhyme, imagery! Well done, sir!
CSwtThng
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Beautiful and uplifting.
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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Wonderful poem.Tim if you don't mind me
asking what kind of work do you do there?
I worked with senior citizens for quite a
few years.And I miss it.One can learn a lot
from them.Anyways I enjoyed your poem.
Areya
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Lovely. Well done
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