Did You Hear The One Man Band

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Open Poetry #1

Did You Hear The One Man Band

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-08-01 03:23 PM

Did You Hear The One Man Band

The orchestra is playing
a crescendo in the song.
Resounding with percussion,
reverberation long.
One hundred pieces blaring,
point and counter point. The beat
attacking, intertwining
with a melody so sweet.
The croud applauds with rapture.
Did they hear or understand
peaceful overture harmonics
prelude by the one man band?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-08-01 07:59 PM

I'm not sure why no one has responded to this one, but I really liked it...in fact a lot. I can really feel this one...nice job!

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Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-08-02 01:05 AM

This was very nice.I liked the rhythm of it.

BONNIE
New Member

since 1999-08-02

Posts 3
VA

3 posted 1999-08-02 01:10 AM

I LIKED IT VERY MUCH

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