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Sundance
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0 posted 08-01-99 01:54 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance


You stay in your own space,
there is an invisible wall.
I dare not sep in it's place,
won't you let it fall?

The wall around you is forbiding,
it scares me to try.
I know your not kidding,
But I ask, why?

Is it love you want,
or is it friendship?
Why are you so blunt,
do you toss and turn like a ship?

I would love to help you,
but is it love you want and need?
It makes me cry, Oh you!,
do you ever want to be freed?

I hope you find a mate,
I say this like a friend.
Don't stay in a never-ending plate,
is there awound that I can mend?

If the wound is great,
why don't you let it heal?
Oh, is it to late?
I hope not, as I kneel!

Your life is a box,
you dare not go out.
It is over you like a pox,
are you in a state of doubt?

I wish I could help,
but when you come around that bend, I'll help, just give yelp!
I will help you mend!!!
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Emmy
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1 posted 08-01-99 04:37 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

I cannot get over how much the person you describe here sounds like Jan!!! Exactly!!! Sighhhhh. This brings back sad memories. Great poetry triumph for you, Aly
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 08-01-99 07:49 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sometimes people have to want to be freed.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Sundance
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3 posted 08-01-99 09:15 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks for the input, and it is about jan, well Jan inspired me to do this piece!

 
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