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Jocular_Jockie
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since 07-31-99
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0 posted 08-01-99 11:11 AM       View Profile for Jocular_Jockie   Email Jocular_Jockie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jocular_Jockie's Home Page   View IP for Jocular_Jockie

The night sky,
is swallowed.
Clouds hover sllwoyl over,
blocking out the moon.
A flash of ligtning,
fills the night air,
with bursts of vibrant colors,
as I walk down the street.
Rain
comes pelting down,
it burns ice cold,
as it splashes upon my neck.
A shiver awakens me,
it bring me back to dying reality
to a world of hapiness and pain.
I wonder along,
trying to figure out life,
it's point,
it's purpose.
And I look up into the night sky,
through a gap in the clouds,
where the stars shine brightly.
and everything fades away,
becuase there,
up in the sky,
a streak of light flashes through the night,
through the air,
with a tail of gold,
and a head of blue,
a comet.
The clouds start to clear,
and the moon materializes in the night,
as I walk down the street,
with a smile.

Written by: Seth Adams
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


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nice job! Great detail.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 08-01-99 07:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah to be so young and so talented....a poets dream! Good job Seth, keep at it.

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