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The Comet |
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Jocular_Jockie Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 11 |
The night sky, is swallowed. Clouds hover sllwoyl over, blocking out the moon. A flash of ligtning, fills the night air, with bursts of vibrant colors, as I walk down the street. Rain comes pelting down, it burns ice cold, as it splashes upon my neck. A shiver awakens me, it bring me back to dying reality to a world of hapiness and pain. I wonder along, trying to figure out life, it's point, it's purpose. And I look up into the night sky, through a gap in the clouds, where the stars shine brightly. and everything fades away, becuase there, up in the sky, a streak of light flashes through the night, through the air, with a tail of gold, and a head of blue, a comet. The clouds start to clear, and the moon materializes in the night, as I walk down the street, with a smile. Written by: Seth Adams |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
nice job! Great detail. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah to be so young and so talented....a poets dream! Good job Seth, keep at it. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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