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Prayer to the Moon

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Valor~
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0 posted 07-31-99 07:11 PM       View Profile for Valor~   Email Valor~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Valor~

Find for me a place to rest my soul.
Let the ocean crash upon my feet.
With your forces, guide me with your light.
Give me strength níer to admit defeat.

Find me peace within myself, love.
Find someone who will need me badly...
Let me mend his aching heart and mind.
Donít let us sit apart so sadly.

Luna, let us drink the brandywine,
and make sweet love till we can no more.
Blanket your ocean down around us,
Crashing your waves upon the sweet shore.

Mezmorize us with your light and love.
Let our hearts melt together as one.
Take from us those evil dreams and pain.
Let our love continue through the sun.

Luna, let us find what we deserve.
Let your moonlight shine down around me.
Give me strength to find my destined one,
and shine your light so he may find me.

©1999 Valor~

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Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful."
© Copyright 1999 Valor~ - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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1 posted 07-31-99 08:33 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Valor....welcome, what a wonderful piece of work, anxiously awaiting more from you.
Valor~
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2 posted 07-31-99 08:38 PM       View Profile for Valor~   Email Valor~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Valor~

Thank you very much! I am glad I've found a place where I can share such similar interests and emotions!

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Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful."
Alwye
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Valor, this is very beautiful. I love the moon...well, the night time in general. Anyway, keep up the great work, I'll be looking for more!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


Valor~
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4 posted 08-01-99 01:02 AM       View Profile for Valor~   Email Valor~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Valor~

Thank you, Alwye!

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Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful."
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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5 posted 08-01-99 03:14 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Very beautiful! Excellent work!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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6 posted 08-01-99 03:20 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Moved even this dead heart, well done. I look forward to more.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


 
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