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I am He

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Alicat
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0 posted 07-31-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

I am He


I am He
The twice born Son
Unconceived
As yet undone
In my hand
I hold a gun
Against Blind Justice
The Tainted One
There is no ransom
She shan't go free
Forever will she be
Next to me
I feel the trigger
I see the blow
Recoil in anger
She bleeds not slow
I heal the wound
With soothing speech
So I can kill her
Again next week
Every time I feel the itch
A thousand times, I'll kill the Bitch
As yet undone
Unconceived
The twice born Son
I am He
So it is written
So shall it be
So it is spoken
So mote it be


Alicat


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Le Jongleur Aspirante




[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 07-31-99).]
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elvira
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1 posted 07-31-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i absolutely adore the word "shan't"...interesting poem, the heavenly avenger?

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Delores Hall
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2 posted 07-31-99 07:27 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Are you mad at someone?This is weird.
Sally S.
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3 posted 07-31-99 08:01 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Perhaps you should explain this one to us a bit. I think I have an idea what it's all about..but, I don't want to misinterpret.
Alicat
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4 posted 07-31-99 09:01 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

elvira: Thanks! shan't and sharn't

Dolores: Nope, not angry at anyone. Just that I have many different poetic sides, from the satanic to angelic, free and constructed, love and hate. I think you catch the drift. After 10 years of writing poetry, I think I would shoot myself if I was still writing in the same style.

Sally: When this was wrote, I believe I was listening to Iron Maiden's "Seventh Son of a Seventh Son". It's basically about revolution and the angst-ridden hatred of 'Justice' in this present context. And, no, I'm not advocating overthrow of the government..at least not at the moment..it's just something that wrote itself. Also, the last 4 lines are a conclusive ending, prophetic in nature. i.e. 'As it is written, so shall it be' kinda thing.


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5 posted 08-01-99 11:13 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Beautifully written.. Once again I was in your mind with this one.. Tell you late about that.. Change of style for you.. Great job.. I hope that you do this again soon..

Love,
Lady

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Munda
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7 posted 08-09-2005 07:20 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

now this is interesting...

would love if you come back for a re-cap of this, all things considering...
Susan Caldwell
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I am with Karen on this.

Outstanding.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

 
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