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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-07-31 11:34 AM


Parting is such sweet sorrow,
I'm addicted to this place like "crack"
But as usual I gotta go,
But I sure do plan to come back.

All of you folks have been so kind,
You've welcomed me and my friends,
And as soon as I can get some more time
I'll be back over and over again.

Watch out for LongJohn the sailor,
He's a rascal extraordinaire,
He'll melt your heart without failure,
But a finer fella you'll find no where.

Suthern and Rainbow are dear sweet gals,
With talents that go way beyond,
The limits I have with my silly stuff,
And with them you will grow quite fond.

© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 1999-07-31 11:37 AM


One teensy flaw with your otherwise excellent poem... you neglected to tell them about Toerag's wonderful attributes. *G* Ah, well... they'll just have to stay tuned! LOL. Hurry back!!!
Menage #1
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 28

2 posted 1999-07-31 04:53 PM


...Und vee haff zum zurprizzees foor zee bunches of you azz vell!!!!!!
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Menage Numero Une de Trois..... heheheee....

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
3 posted 1999-07-31 06:51 PM


Menage #1

lol - very creative! I loved it!

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
4 posted 1999-07-31 07:01 PM


ménage à trois

Hmmm, not here, I'm simply a lover of true style and that is something Toe has in abundance, along with Suthern, LJA and Lor...but then I am biased because they are all lovers of peace, goodwill and truth...and pride in them, dictates this little but significant post.:-))

But love the smileys..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-31-99).]

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