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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-31-99 08:50 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

God, I wish I could go back
to being what I was.
Cutting no one any slack
and hurting them, "Because."
I want to carve out this heart
and toss it to the dogs.
Peel this pain back to the start
and go to sawing logs.
Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.


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leelew
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1 posted 07-31-99 08:55 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

You can't go back...what was there is now gone....you can only go forward and met each new challenge knowing how much stronger you've gotten.I'll be right behind you....always!
Gentle Soul
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2 posted 08-01-99 12:48 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

please dont go back Dream.. you are too special to go back.. *hugs*

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Valor~
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3 posted 08-01-99 01:04 AM       View Profile for Valor~   Email Valor~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Valor~

DreamEvil, you write with such emotion. I love your work. I am looking forward to reading more of it!

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Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful."
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4 posted 08-01-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Hahaha.. At times I feel the same.. Right now as a matter of fact.. I love this piece.. Can I add it to my collection?

Love,
Lady

Love is not blind, it sees more not less; but because it sees more it is willing to see less.
thursdayschild
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5 posted 08-01-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Powerful, full of emotion....
Please don't toss that wonderful heart!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 08-01-99 02:19 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

No, definitely don't toss out that wonderful heart. And never go back, its in the past, leave it there. An emotional piece, Dream, and very well done.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


~one voice~
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7 posted 08-01-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

You CAN'T toss your heart! That is where these beautiful words come from! Besides, that heart of yours is a gift from the Angels!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

DreamEvil
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8 posted 08-01-99 03:09 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I appreciate the concern you all feel. It is returned.
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 08-01-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I feel this way often dream, it is hard to feel everyones pain as well as your own. I guess that's what happens when one cares too much...but considering the alternative, I'll stick to this one!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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