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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 07-31-99 03:06 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I keep all my treasures
safe within my heart
But it's not because of what they cost
that gives them
so much measure
but the continuation
of these gifts
That really plays the part

It's the simple things
that mean so much
and bring me
so much pleasure
the priceless gift
with the loving touch,
that have earnt their place
with all my other treasures

You may be wondering to yourself
what are these gifts I talk of
so one by one
I'll take them out
and try to guide you
through them
Firstly, there is Caring
given one day at dawn

Followed by the Loving thoughts
with so much Time and Passion
The Hope, Trust and Wisdom
and Honesty never rationed
Smiling to myself
I've kept the best till last
how could my treasures be complete
without the HUGS and Laughter

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-31-99).]
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frosty006
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1 posted 07-31-99 04:51 AM       View Profile for frosty006   Email frosty006   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frosty006

I really enjoyed your poem. And I'm not just saying that cus you liked mine. we have 2 completely different moods of writing but i like yours.
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 07-31-99 06:24 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you..:-)) I wrote it a while ago but thought if I posted it here it would remind me of who I was and it did..:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
suthern
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3 posted 07-31-99 08:26 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

VL/RG: Changing names doesn't keep those hugs from shining through! LOL.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 07-31-99 08:41 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sounds like these treasures are a recipe for a happy life. I liked this one.
Toerag
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5 posted 07-31-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Hmmm?..Rainbow Girl?....Sounds familiar?....Now could it be?...Nawww.....ain't no Brits here...is there?.....Sweet Poem from a sweet gal....
Craig
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There are a couple of us, not many as good as this ‘FairLady’ though.
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 07-31-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Yep, you sussed me out guys...it's the 'Brit'..:-))

Hugs all and thank you..:-))

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
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