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In My Thoughts

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Nicole
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0 posted 07-31-99 02:52 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

In My Thoughts

High atop a mountain,
Where eagles rule the sky,
To witness this creation,
Of beauty, undenied.

The strong and raging rivers,
The lakes of emerald green,
The snow capped peaks of jagged rock,
A silent, sweet serene.

To gaze upon the distant life,
Of the valley down below,
One ponders insignificance,
In this, our earthly role.

And yet, through friends as true as you,
One finds a sense of peace.
To know these ties which bind us,
Are never to decease.

Now as I watch the setting sun,
For words, I’m at a loss.
For now it’s all come down to me,
And you…..within my thoughts.


[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 07-31-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 07-31-99 02:59 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful....I have felt like this many times. Keep up the excellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-31-99 02:59 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Marvelous imagery, my dear. It paints a lovely picture of you. I could only hope that someday someone will think as well of me.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


Nicole
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3 posted 07-31-99 03:04 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Alwye, thank you very much!

DE, thank you as well, for your kind words. I must admit though, this one was for you.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 07-31-99).]
hoot_owl_rn
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This was a very beautiful poem. The rythym and rhyme really work well.
Toerag
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5 posted 07-31-99 10:29 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Very pretty...could almost see what you were describing...
MissNTrope
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6 posted 07-31-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for MissNTrope   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for MissNTrope

I see it!!
Sally S.
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7 posted 07-31-99 04:29 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Lovely. Very nice use of imagery and form. Nice work.
Nicole
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8 posted 07-31-99 09:41 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Thank you all very much!
Elizabeth
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9 posted 07-31-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

How beautiful! I could see the place you were describing-the imagery in this one is EXCELLENT! I will look for your work in the future.

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10 posted 07-31-99 09:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautiful, Satiate, the significance and insignificance of it all.
Nicole
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Thank you!!
Lost Dreamer
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12 posted 08-01-99 09:37 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I enjoyed this very much, it made me think of a dear friend of mine who I am miles away from now. Beautiful scenes you created.
Nicole
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Lost Dreamer, I am very glad you enjoyed it! And if it made you think of someone dear to you that is far away, it served it's purpose. What a wonderful compliment.
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14 posted 08-01-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Satiate: It served its purpose very well then! *S* It made me think of places I've been, places I'd like to go... and a friend who's always within my thoughts!
Nicole
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15 posted 08-01-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

suthern, I'm so glad to hear that!! Thank you very much.
Areya
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16 posted 08-02-99 02:35 AM       View Profile for Areya   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Areya

Very well captured. Great work
angel girl
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17 posted 08-02-99 07:19 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

wow, excellent imagery. i loved the way you put your thoughts into words. would you mind if i printed this one out and sent it to some friends?

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The world is in your hands; it is what you make of it.

keep on chuggin'
Nicole
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Areya, thank you!

angel girl, of course you may print it out! Thank you for the compliment!
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