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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 1999-07-31 02:52 AM

In My Thoughts

High atop a mountain,
Where eagles rule the sky,
To witness this creation,
Of beauty, undenied.

The strong and raging rivers,
The lakes of emerald green,
The snow capped peaks of jagged rock,
A silent, sweet serene.

To gaze upon the distant life,
Of the valley down below,
One ponders insignificance,
In this, our earthly role.

And yet, through friends as true as you,
One finds a sense of peace.
To know these ties which bind us,
Are never to decease.

Now as I watch the setting sun,
For words, I’m at a loss.
For now it’s all come down to me,
And you…..within my thoughts.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 07-31-99).]

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-31 02:59 AM

Beautiful....I have felt like this many times. Keep up the excellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-31 02:59 AM

Marvelous imagery, my dear. It paints a lovely picture of you. I could only hope that someday someone will think as well of me.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 1999-07-31 03:04 AM

Alwye, thank you very much!

DE, thank you as well, for your kind words. I must admit though, this one was for you.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 07-31-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-07-31 10:15 AM

This was a very beautiful poem. The rythym and rhyme really work well.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 1999-07-31 10:29 AM

Very pretty...could almost see what you were describing...

MissNTrope
Junior Member

since 1999-07-29

Posts 43

6 posted 1999-07-31 04:01 PM

I see it!!

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

7 posted 1999-07-31 04:29 PM

Lovely. Very nice use of imagery and form. Nice work.

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

8 posted 1999-07-31 09:41 PM

Thank you all very much!

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

9 posted 1999-07-31 09:45 PM

How beautiful! I could see the place you were describing-the imagery in this one is EXCELLENT! I will look for your work in the future.

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Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 1999-07-31 09:47 PM

Beautiful, Satiate, the significance and insignificance of it all.

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

11 posted 1999-08-01 03:50 AM

Thank you!!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

12 posted 1999-08-01 09:37 AM

I enjoyed this very much, it made me think of a dear friend of mine who I am miles away from now. Beautiful scenes you created.

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

13 posted 1999-08-01 03:11 PM

Lost Dreamer, I am very glad you enjoyed it! And if it made you think of someone dear to you that is far away, it served it's purpose. What a wonderful compliment.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 1999-08-01 08:11 PM

Satiate: It served its purpose very well then! *S* It made me think of places I've been, places I'd like to go... and a friend who's always within my thoughts!

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

15 posted 1999-08-01 09:32 PM

suthern, I'm so glad to hear that!!

Thank you very much.

Areya
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 16

16 posted 1999-08-02 02:35 AM

Very well captured. Great work

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

17 posted 1999-08-02 07:19 AM

wow, excellent imagery. i loved the way you put your thoughts into words. would you mind if i printed this one out and sent it to some friends?

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The world is in your hands; it is what you make of it.

keep on chuggin'

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

18 posted 1999-08-02 12:27 PM

Areya, thank you!

angel girl, of course you may print it out! Thank you for the compliment!

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