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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

0 posted 1999-07-31 02:13 AM

Lovers Lonely Tears

Slow rain falls
On mourners there
Upon marble stone
Falls lovers tear

Flowers lay
On fresh opened ground
Petals pink
Strewn all around

The cold earth
Body warm once holds
Lonely heart
Now grief enfolds

He is here
And she is gone
One lover left
To carry on

Teardrops fall
Against marble stone
Love of two
Now one alone

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 1999-07-31 02:34 AM

So sad...and so touching. You conveyed a sense of lonliness so clearly. Thank you for sharing this.

Cobra
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 58

2 posted 1999-07-31 02:35 AM

Great poem Hoot! I admire your skill in poetry sooo much! *sigh* Will I ever write like that?

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Cammie

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 1999-07-31 04:04 AM

This was very beautifully written!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-07-31 09:55 AM

Saitate, Cobra and tulip.....thanks so very much
and Cobra, I've seen your work and you do write this well

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-07-31 11:49 AM

Sad but lovely! I like the picture of teardrops on marble stone....I can see that!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 1999-07-31 04:59 PM

I guess we've all been there at one time or another in our lives, eh R???
Nice work....

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

7 posted 1999-07-31 09:51 PM

Very sad...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 1999-07-31 10:02 PM

Nan, how very true

Poet and Elizabeth, thank you

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Phantom
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 18

9 posted 1999-08-03 05:55 AM

Very touching!

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

10 posted 1999-08-03 08:02 AM

so sad,

but death is a part of life. what irony

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