EXCELLENT!!! This poem works wonderfully. You should be quite proud of yourself with this one. I love the imagery, the tone, the thought and especially the flow like that water you speak of....softly flowing but crashing thoughts upon this rock of a mind of mine. Absolutely loved this piece!
Thanks for your comments. It's always nice to read them...
I'll resist the temptation, CSwtThng, to respond the the comment about God, except to say that I truly believe in my heart that the person who believes that God walks with them is the most alone of all.
------------------ William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm