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Your Love is Like...

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Cobra
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0 posted 07-30-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Your love is like a doctor,
it heals my broken heart.
It soothes my aches and my pains,
by loving every part.

Your love is like a singer,
it fills my heart with song.
Whenever I am feeling down,
your love rings like a gong.

Your love is like a stuntman,
it does what others don't.
You are willing to risk it all,
while other lovers won't.

In other words your love is like,
an angel to my soul.
To bring me peace and happiness,
is your only goal.

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Cammie
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Elizabeth
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America the beautiful


1 posted 07-31-99 12:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I like this one a lot. I think it's beautiful. Now all I have to do is find someone that I can write romantic poetry like this to...

*Elizabeth*



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 07-31-99).]
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 07-31-99 10:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

My love is like a sail boat
drifting on the sea
waiting for another love
to find it's way to me

My love is like a river
to deep for one to span
and so I build up bridges
to help the only way I can

My love is like a white dove
soaring gracefully
oh tell me when, my dear love
will you fly to me?


Ooops.....sorry, sometimes I just have to go with it. Very nice poem anyway, thank you.
Nan
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since 05-20-99
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3 posted 07-31-99 03:55 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hoot's Dove


Cobra
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since 07-27-99
Posts 60


4 posted 07-31-99 06:55 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thanks! Very nice poem Hoot.
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
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5 posted 07-31-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

My love is like a football,
I kick it all around.
But when it finally lands again,
I can't predict its bounce.

My love is like a mangy dog,
The way it makes me itch.
Thank God my little Lorelei,
Will never be a ......

My love is like lil Cobra,
So forgiving of my ways?
I really am just kidding around,
I hope my poem's OK.

lil Cobra - I liked the way you made your poem flow, and the way you used similes to compare love to many other common things.
Cobra
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6 posted 07-31-99 08:00 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Why thank you LngJhnAg! Good poem.
 
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