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Crystal
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25 posted 08-02-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

Very deep. Valor said it all.
DreamEvil
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26 posted 08-02-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Looks like the message is being heard,instead of the messenger, good.
blueloon
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27 posted 08-02-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I am having trouble with words to write...I can't see my screen clearly for the tears are rolling...You have given strength to women by writing these very words...Thank you.
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Purgatorial Incarceration


28 posted 08-03-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Tragic to realize that such things happen every day. But perhaps poignant stories such as this will help people to see.

Well Written!

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Michael
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29 posted 08-18-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

DreamEvil,
I have read this three time now. This last time I was even fully awake. You have left me gasping for the right words to compliment this work. It's poignant, very powerful, and left a very sad aftertone.
She almost seems to wear her blood as a testimonial to her heart. I have seen situations close to this in my life. this poem really hits home.
Thanks for sharing such a "Dark" poem.

Michael
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30 posted 08-18-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Great work DE,i can say much i am still
crying.
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