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Hello love.......................

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amber
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0 posted 07-30-99 09:39 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

dearest love,


Hello love, i love you,
just as i always have,
but i dont understand,
how you can hurt me so bad,
your words mean so much to me,
but your past haunts us both,
you have a way of buliding walls,
instead of letting go,
you know my love, i need you,
in my life to stay,
but your eyes seem shadowed,
by the things you cant say,
i want trust you love,
but your making it so hard,
with everything youve put me through,
my soul is forever scared,
but ive let the pain go,
just to love you agian,
still it hurts to tell you,
that im affriad it will end,
yes love, i love you,
but is that enough,
i feel you slipping so soon,
pushing away my touch,
its hard for me to love you,
when your so hard to understand,
but i know it will be harder,
if i loose you agian,
love, be careful with me,
youve broken my spirits before,
im trying to make it right this time,
and i cant try anymore,
love i need to hold you,
and know your where you should be,
but most of all my love,
i need to know you love me.

always and forever,
me
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 07-30-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very well written. Wish they would love back a little more.
amber
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2 posted 07-30-99 11:04 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you for you comment, believe me no one wishes more than me.
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3 posted 02-16-2002 11:18 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope he answers your hearts calling and loves you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
 
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