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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 07-30-99 09:24 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

im trying so hard to be patient,
with what youve given me,
an answer, and a promise,
but its not what i need.

i need the love to whisper to me,
through sweet tempered eyes,
and tell me everythings okay,
and i dont have to comprimise.

i want to know you need me,
above anything else,
that you can see forever in me,
and cherish the things weve felt.

i have to trust you truly,
with everything i am,
and know inside my heart,
you wont hurt me again.

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-30-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

I understand your desire....but never being hurt again is not a realistic goal. Nicely written.
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Everyone has a right to that
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3 posted 07-31-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

sometimes its not healthy to only believe and set realistic goals, becuase then you forget how to dream. thank you for your comments.
 
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