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culvram
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 8
Culver,OR USA

0 posted 1999-07-30 03:22 PM


What are we doing,
it seems you don't care.
I just ask for time,
but it seems you're not there.
It all boils down to,
what's important to you.
By now you should know,
that to you I am true.
I get a strange feeling,
this is already old.
I can't understand,
why you seem so cold.
I'll do anything,
you should know I care.
Just sit down and talk,
I'll always be there.
This is not to cause hurt,
but cure it instead.
For as we both know,
our minds can't be read.

© Copyright 1999 culvram - All Rights Reserved
Cobra
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58

1 posted 1999-07-30 05:09 PM


Well written Culvram.
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-30 07:24 PM


*sigh*...i guess we all wish our loved ones could read our minds

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I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone ~Morrissey~

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