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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 1999-07-30 03:15 PM


There was a world before this one,
Our souls existed, God called us His sons.
Ol' Satan he was good then too,
Till he tried to deceive me and you.
his mind puffed up, he wanted God's place,
And went astray, instead of accepting God's grace.
He (Satan) drew a 1/3 of God's children,
Thru deception and lies and now the world which we live in.
So your soul in the flesh, was placed on Earth,
Placed at conception, before your birth.
So as a babe, not remembering before,
God opened the Heaven, He opened the door.
Born as a babe, from God above,
He put us here because of His love.
He wanted to give us all a fresh start,
He gave us free will, and hoped we'd be smart.
He loves us so much, He gave us a choice,
On whom we follow, God's will? or Satan's voice?
He put us here to make up our mind,
It's not forced upon us, it's ours to find.
The love He gave us, give in return,
Then He will teach, and we will learn.
Satan is trying to deceive once more,
Just like he did in the world before.
Remember God says, you know the truth,
I sent MY WORD, He was living proof.
He's calling to rememberance, the truth you once heard,
And told us again in the Bible, His Word.

Thanks to God for the inspiration

© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-07-30 05:34 PM


So nobody like these kinds of poems huh?
Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-07-30 05:47 PM


You posted at 3
You comment at 5?
God also gave us the will to survive.

Survival means work
For unfortunate few.
God, please grant us patience - especially, you.

Gentle Soul
Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-07-31 12:08 PM


of course whtdove.. I love these poems.. just have been XTREMELY busy lately!

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