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Nectar
Junior Member
since 1999-06-09
Posts 18
Pensacola, Florida

0 posted 1999-07-30 01:43 PM


Memories fall like rain
Splashing through the puddles
I am joyously searching
For anything that reminds me of you
Your eyes: azure perfection
Your smile: unveiled beauty
Your voice: angel’s laughter
My feet become prunes
Yet long ago did I realize
Looking for anything
I found that everything
Reminds me of you

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-07-30 02:12 PM


Excellent!! Need I say more?
Cobra
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58

2 posted 1999-07-30 05:07 PM


Great metaphors Nectar! Real nice. ^_^

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Cammie

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