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Kitty**
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0 posted 07-30-99 07:24 AM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**




Yes, I have a passion...
To be held in your arms...
To snuggle in your warm embrace...
Feeling safe from harm.

I would love to walk with you...
After the sun goes down...
Down to a sandy beach...
And spread a blanket on the ground.

There we would become entwined...
Two hearts would beat as one...
A soft sweet kiss..a playful shove...
And then we'd start to run.

I would let you catch me...
We are laughing with such bliss...
Yes..this is a fantansy...
In my mind I picture this.

I can feel your tender touch...
Your warm breath on my cheek...
While standing close in your arms...
My knees become so weak.

You tell me that you love me...
I say.."I love you too"...
Then overcome with passion...
We both know what to do.

At this special time...
We let our emotions flow...
My fantansy becomes reality...
I don't want to let it go.

But once more I return...
from the world that I was in...
Tonight after the sun goes down...
Fantansy takes me to the beach again.

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Kitty**
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Cobra
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1 posted 07-30-99 04:31 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Kitty... This poem was lovely! Why hasn't anyone else commented? Come on people, it's beautiful! Don't worry sweetie, you never know if your fantasy will become a reality. I really enjoyed your poem!

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Cammie
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2 posted 07-30-99 05:04 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Kitty, I read your fantasy,
About your fling out on the beach.
And how you'd love to romp along,
Just out of his reach.

When finally succumbing to his arms,
You give a moaning sigh,
Then, just as he moved in,
You'd awake and say, "Good bye."

You are a little devil, Kitty,
I could read in every line,
How you'd drive a man to distraction,
Then act like it was fine.

I must prepare my defenses,
For all know what Kitty**s do.
They toy with helpless micies,
Before turning them into food.


Kitty**

I liked your poem. It flowed well, and left me hanging until the end.


Kitty**
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3 posted 07-30-99 05:10 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

CAMMI..It's responses like this that really
bolsters my courage to post my "stuff"..LOL..
Thank you sincerely, and I do know that sometimes fantasies do come true.


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Kitty**
Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA


4 posted 07-30-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

HEYYYYYY..LngJhnAg...that's NOT fair..
Your poem was better then mine, but in
all honesty, everybody knows about a cat!
Purr, purr, ;-)

Ooops..left off my 'S'..(G)

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