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Three bad choices, think of another?

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tulip
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0 posted 07-29-99 11:20 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I just wrote this in a matter of seconds, so it's not that good; but it's exactly how I feel at the moment.


To live a life,
without any love
is what I have to do.
I cannot end
with your own terms
and miss my child too.

I love a man,
he's my best friend,
he knows the pain I'm in.
But he knows, if we ever tried,
I'd loose my life with him.

Another man is drawn to me,
I'm drawn right back to him.
Could I actually have an affair?
Or would he even try?

The choices they make,
are reflections on them,
what kind of men they are,
and so, again,
I will always be,
locked right in this cell.
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1 posted 07-29-99 11:53 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Ouch! Sounds tough. And don't worry about it not being good-some great poems have some out in a matter of seconds! I could feel emotional reading this...
Delores Hall
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2 posted 07-29-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

All I can say is WOW.Tough situation to
be in. I hope you can work it out.
tulip
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3 posted 07-30-99 02:41 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I don't have the answer...
Crystal
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4 posted 07-30-99 02:44 AM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

What you feel is right shall come to you. DO only what you feel, not what others say.
tulip
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5 posted 07-30-99 02:53 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

But what I feel, isn't necessarily the RIGHT thing, you know?
 
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